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10-16-2009, 11:16 AM

i forget


I wrote and I was 16 and now begun, modifying
I'm 17 and this I now Any way
I hope my story you will understand it Because of my english is not good


Yes،، i'm see ،،see love and compassion was seen when the kindness and love when he smiles when me laugh،، i'm See him and he Talk my friend i'm smiled warmly addressed the severity of the critical and there my heart ripped from my body handed ،over to them When shook my
hand

My friend said: ""We have called،، Engagement''
Change my Color and I felt like wanting to cry if his love of a one-sided that my parties

my legs Ba You can not stand this painful news for me, I said coldly, "Congratulations"

I went and entered the apartment were seen myself in the mirror
why did not him like me why I'm not ugly and not hateful

If you are not does not love me as I love you why i'm not do something to him .. become I walk in the apartment and entered into my room

Eliminated all of the placebo thrown myself on the couch

and I cried oh I have bad luck when I liked I did not have me
My friend came and saw me as well as her and said me: "What do you Why are you crying"

I looked at her eyes and said huskily: "It was not me"

I smiled to me and my friend said: "It is not yours, weep not, dear"

I smiled and went to the kitchen to bring food and if something did not happen helped me to bring food, smiles at her and tried to block the tears from falling

we ate I told her sadly: "When ..?" To responded with amazement: "When
what?" I smiled yah a good girl

I said to her: "engagement" I was surprised my friend and said: "Are you are going are you crazy

I smiled and tears are falling I said to her: "I want to see his Future wife and Why virtues and has been chosen him "

My friend smiled a smile Yellow She Not like the My going
To the ceremony

. And walked around the days and weeks, and now came the time on his engagement

I wore the best dress
and put makeup steamy I do not want to fiance be better than me
Entered to my friend opened her mouth surprised she said, "You are charming I do not know what to say"

I told her smiled calmly, "Are you ready"
Shook her head yes mark We went out of the house

And we rode to the car and started to walk my friend and my heart rate started Increasing and fade

Until we got my girlfriend and said calmly, "we"

I trembled from the floor and started to shudder and my heart will come out of place because of the fast movement

Out of the car and I said confusedly, "Do I Do I look pretty good?" Looked at my friend's Overview she said, "Be Believe in yourself you're beautiful it was not yours"

"I felt the desire to cry and I say to myself] [Calm down do not spoil everything] [We went into the hotel where his engagement ceremony, the my

eyes are looking for one person and was not here
Five minutes passed quickly and entered, his hands clutching the girl's hand
And the usual smile If so excited i Did not see the girl،،

My eyes just look at him and smile And elegance order that he was very glad jealousy started to eat my heart and my mind was prey ravage in itself ،
I had hoped that it something will come،،And destroy those Time
After the applause and looks of admiration that received the guests

Have started to peace on the couple, said my friend, "What do you think his fiancee" I shook my head sign no،،

Started to walk to the couple looked at me and smiled and said "Thank God that you are coming," i'm smiled the word said him،،

i said him, voice barely above a whisper, "Congratulations"

I said it and the pain inside my heart replied me, and looked at his fiancée, who scream femininity and beauty she smiles compliment I said

"Congratulations," responded a smile she said "Thank you"
My friend and I stood side I said, "she very beautiful and the femininity
And have no taste "

My friend giggled at what I said, she said, "How to have a feminine and have no taste, No matter on،، when"

My friend did not complete the sentence because
the music started ،،the spouses started

dancing, I opened my mouth surprisingly and accelerated heart beats a little on Jealousy

Tried to calm myself and sat on a chair and i wet my lips I said to myself] [Calm down Calm down] [

i Could not bear to sit more than looked at me and smiled and i smiled him That my teeth have emerged
He has been dancing and his eyes look at me
Looks him made me embarrassed

And started to play for in my hair Until ended music And stood in the dance and went to the me
And my heart is ripped from my body

I looked at him with amazement
Sat on the chair beside me

He said, "Why i feel you not fine and is not happy" I looked at his eyes and i see solemnity Entered my hands in my hair to hide the confusion
I said, "Your fiancee is beautiful"

He smiled and consider to him said quietly "and wonderful"

Caught fire in my heart and I began to feel nervous smiled his smile Yellow ،،So I stoped and said calmly, "I wish you a happy life"

He looked at me shock and stop, he said, "why time to wheel Sit Packer stayed on the ceremony many" Extended my hand to my bye, I said, "I did

not sleep well and tired establishment of the Lord in your marriage a stay long"

He shook my hand trembled my body and looked at my friend and I told her I would be going

I came out of the hotel and my heart was went out of his place
Entered the car and started crying and started play a make-up turn it on and Committees Yes i try to forget is not worthy of my love is not worthy of my
heart Forget Yes Forget

That my friend came and Entered the car and started to walk and I felt comfortable

And three-quarters of my heart is fading love of my heart, because he is not worthy .... Yes, I try to forget ..


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10-31-2009, 06:51 PM
it's great story go ahead >> there is some mistake but good begning
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10-31-2009, 06:55 PM
wow that's the greatest story ever heard
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